Good morning, FFFs!
Wow! I was not expecting the kind of response I got for designing covers! It's been fun, but a bit crazy at times. So, if you are waiting to hear back from me about your cover design, just know that I will get to it. I've just been juggling 5 different covers this week. :) I've loved getting to see what everyone comes up with and how they arrange graphics and images, titles and fonts. Hopefully I'll be able to release these covers with their stories in the near future. But no rush!
Writing has been slow this week. I thought I had a breakthrough for "By Paths Unknown" and, while in a way I did, it's still stuck. I got through an important conversation, but that's it. So, while the story stews a little longer, I started working on another short story. I know, I know, it's not like I needed another story, right? Well, actually I did, since I don't know what to post next on here. :) This story is coming together quickly, but I'm in need of a last name for a family from Mexico. Any suggestions?
As far as our weather, it's been windy! We've had a bit of sun here and there, and two days of rain. But today and for several days after this, we're supposed to get sunshine and warmer weather! 50s and 60's! The daffodils have already started blooming a little, and I imagine that a week of sunshine will bring all kinds of blossoms and buds on things. Spring is coming!
So, what have you been busy with this week? Anything new and interesting? School? Have you read any good books lately? Are you still in winter or have you felt the fresh breath of spring?
Being Decisive
Part 3
Last week . . .
"Lou,” she told the silent, frightened girl who was clinging to her hand, “you have to be brave and help Liz keep Dick from moving. When she goes for help, you sit still up here and talk to us, okay?”
Lou nodded.
“And pray, girls,” Mel said, standing up and pulling her hand away from her cousin’s grasp. “Hang on Dicky,” she shouted down. “I’m going to come to you and then I’ll tell you a story.” Without waiting to hear if Dick would reply, Mel had begun to move toward the trees. The hillside was steeper than she thought but she didn’t care. Half running, half sliding from tree to tree, she made her breathless way down and at last reached flat ground. Here she had to push her way through a tangle of brambles before reaching the open. Once there she could see the cliff side.
“Help me, dear Lord,” she panted, running along with eyes open, looking for the best place to climb up. At last, reaching a place that seemed most likely, she started up. But she had only gotten a short ways before her feet slipped.
“I can’t climb the side of the cliff with cowboy boots on,” she muttered, jerking them off. Next her socks came off and were stuffed in her pockets. It was easier to climb after that, for she could grip rocks with her toes just as she used to climb the swing rope back home. As she climbed higher, she could hear Liz’s voice up above her. Not once did she dare to look down lest she panic. “Keep going, keep going,” she told herself each time she wanted to stop. “Dick needs you.”
Persistently she continued upwards, unmindful of rocks which cut her hands and feet, ignoring the aching in her legs and arms as she pulled and pushed herself ever higher. Liz’s voice was growing louder and then she heard Dick’s voice. She was almost there! By this time she was breathing in gasps. “Just a little farther,” she thought. “I’m almost there!”
It felt like months to the waiting cousins on top of the cliff who had watched the slow climb with pounding hearts, but to the climber, it seemed like years before she at last pulled herself onto the ledge with Dick. She had made it.
“I’m here, Liz. Go!” she shouted up as soon as she could catch her breath.
“Tell me a story,” Dick pleaded, whimpering a little as he moved his leg slightly.
“All right, just you lie still now. Lou, can you hear me?” Mel spoke loudly.
“Yes,” came back a tremulous voice.
“Good, because I have a story for you and Dick. Listen up now.” And she launched into a story filled with excitement and adventure, making it up as she went along. She had told stories so often that this one just seemed to tell itself, for, while her mouth was telling the story, her mind was busy with other thoughts. How long would it be, she wondered, before help would arrive? How badly was Dick hurt? She knew almost nothing about first aid, but even she could tell he was suffering, though the gallant little figure didn’t utter one word of complaint. Why had Don left her in charge? Would her uncle or cousins ever trust her again?
As the shadows began to lengthen, Mel began to wonder how long her voice was going to last. She was sure their canteens of water were still on their horses, but she dared not send Lou to get them. What if she were also to fall! And anyway, how would she be able to get them if Lou did bring them? No longer in the sunshine, for the sun had slipped farther to the west, Dick began to shiver. Mel didn’t know if it was shock or cold, but she pulled off the light jacket she had put on that morning and laid it over her cousin.
Would no one ever come? What if something had happened to Liz? Oh, why had they come? Her feet and hands hurt and she was starting to feel dizzy being up so high on such a small ledge.
Then, just when she was sure she could stand the situation no longer, she heard voices above them.
“Listen, Dicky,” she whispered. “Someone has come.”
“Mel! Dick!” A voice called down to them.
“We’re right here, Don,” Mel croaked back, her voice hoarse from her long story and lack of water.
“Just hang on a few more minutes. Tom is coming down for you.”
“You hear that, Dicky,” Mel asked, “Tom is coming.”
Dick nodded his head slowly and a faint whimper escaped his lips.
Looking up, Mel saw her cousin slowly start down the side of the cliff; a rope was tied securely around him and he moved like one used to such things. She noticed he wasn’t wearing his cowboy boots, but regular shoes. This fact brought to mind her own boots lying far below and quickly pulling her socks from her pocket, she gingerly pulled them on.
“I thought you were supposed to go to Lookout Rock, Dick,” a cheery voice said just above them. “And here you are half way down a cliff. Is the view any better here?” As he talked, Tom had reached the ledge. “Slack off the rope!” he called up.
There wasn’t much room for three of them on the ledge and Mel wondered how Tom was going to get Dick up from such cramped space with his injured leg. She couldn’t exactly move farther over, for she was sitting on the edge now. Tom’s next words answered her thoughts but didn’t make her feel more comfortable.
“I’m going to send Mel up first,” Tom shouted upward and began untying the rope which was around him. “All right, Mel,” he said cheerily, “scoot back just a bit so I can get this rope around you. All you’ll have to do is hold on and Don and Jim will pull you up. Come on now. That’s right.” As she scooted back away from the edge.
"Lou,” she told the silent, frightened girl who was clinging to her hand, “you have to be brave and help Liz keep Dick from moving. When she goes for help, you sit still up here and talk to us, okay?”
Lou nodded.
“And pray, girls,” Mel said, standing up and pulling her hand away from her cousin’s grasp. “Hang on Dicky,” she shouted down. “I’m going to come to you and then I’ll tell you a story.” Without waiting to hear if Dick would reply, Mel had begun to move toward the trees. The hillside was steeper than she thought but she didn’t care. Half running, half sliding from tree to tree, she made her breathless way down and at last reached flat ground. Here she had to push her way through a tangle of brambles before reaching the open. Once there she could see the cliff side.
“Help me, dear Lord,” she panted, running along with eyes open, looking for the best place to climb up. At last, reaching a place that seemed most likely, she started up. But she had only gotten a short ways before her feet slipped.
“I can’t climb the side of the cliff with cowboy boots on,” she muttered, jerking them off. Next her socks came off and were stuffed in her pockets. It was easier to climb after that, for she could grip rocks with her toes just as she used to climb the swing rope back home. As she climbed higher, she could hear Liz’s voice up above her. Not once did she dare to look down lest she panic. “Keep going, keep going,” she told herself each time she wanted to stop. “Dick needs you.”
Persistently she continued upwards, unmindful of rocks which cut her hands and feet, ignoring the aching in her legs and arms as she pulled and pushed herself ever higher. Liz’s voice was growing louder and then she heard Dick’s voice. She was almost there! By this time she was breathing in gasps. “Just a little farther,” she thought. “I’m almost there!”
It felt like months to the waiting cousins on top of the cliff who had watched the slow climb with pounding hearts, but to the climber, it seemed like years before she at last pulled herself onto the ledge with Dick. She had made it.
“I’m here, Liz. Go!” she shouted up as soon as she could catch her breath.
“Tell me a story,” Dick pleaded, whimpering a little as he moved his leg slightly.
“All right, just you lie still now. Lou, can you hear me?” Mel spoke loudly.
“Yes,” came back a tremulous voice.
“Good, because I have a story for you and Dick. Listen up now.” And she launched into a story filled with excitement and adventure, making it up as she went along. She had told stories so often that this one just seemed to tell itself, for, while her mouth was telling the story, her mind was busy with other thoughts. How long would it be, she wondered, before help would arrive? How badly was Dick hurt? She knew almost nothing about first aid, but even she could tell he was suffering, though the gallant little figure didn’t utter one word of complaint. Why had Don left her in charge? Would her uncle or cousins ever trust her again?
As the shadows began to lengthen, Mel began to wonder how long her voice was going to last. She was sure their canteens of water were still on their horses, but she dared not send Lou to get them. What if she were also to fall! And anyway, how would she be able to get them if Lou did bring them? No longer in the sunshine, for the sun had slipped farther to the west, Dick began to shiver. Mel didn’t know if it was shock or cold, but she pulled off the light jacket she had put on that morning and laid it over her cousin.
Would no one ever come? What if something had happened to Liz? Oh, why had they come? Her feet and hands hurt and she was starting to feel dizzy being up so high on such a small ledge.
Then, just when she was sure she could stand the situation no longer, she heard voices above them.
“Listen, Dicky,” she whispered. “Someone has come.”
“Mel! Dick!” A voice called down to them.
“We’re right here, Don,” Mel croaked back, her voice hoarse from her long story and lack of water.
“Just hang on a few more minutes. Tom is coming down for you.”
“You hear that, Dicky,” Mel asked, “Tom is coming.”
Dick nodded his head slowly and a faint whimper escaped his lips.
Looking up, Mel saw her cousin slowly start down the side of the cliff; a rope was tied securely around him and he moved like one used to such things. She noticed he wasn’t wearing his cowboy boots, but regular shoes. This fact brought to mind her own boots lying far below and quickly pulling her socks from her pocket, she gingerly pulled them on.
“I thought you were supposed to go to Lookout Rock, Dick,” a cheery voice said just above them. “And here you are half way down a cliff. Is the view any better here?” As he talked, Tom had reached the ledge. “Slack off the rope!” he called up.
There wasn’t much room for three of them on the ledge and Mel wondered how Tom was going to get Dick up from such cramped space with his injured leg. She couldn’t exactly move farther over, for she was sitting on the edge now. Tom’s next words answered her thoughts but didn’t make her feel more comfortable.
“I’m going to send Mel up first,” Tom shouted upward and began untying the rope which was around him. “All right, Mel,” he said cheerily, “scoot back just a bit so I can get this rope around you. All you’ll have to do is hold on and Don and Jim will pull you up. Come on now. That’s right.” As she scooted back away from the edge.
Would you have had the courage to sit were Mel sat?
Have you ever tried climbing something barefoot?
(I used to climb a rope swing barefoot, gripping the rope with my toes.)
Any suggestions for a last name for Pedro's family?
I'm not sure if I would have the courage to sit where Melody sat! (I'm not sure if she would have known before this experience, either. ;)
ReplyDeleteYes, I used to climb trees barefoot; it's fun! :)
Here's a name for Pedro's family: Martinez. :)
I'm enjoying reading this story! Thanks for sharing!
Yeah, I don't think I would have wanted to be there, and Mel would probably have been too frightened if she'd thought about it.
ReplyDeleteBarefoot! :D
I like that name. Much better than the placeholder I have now!
Thanks for reading, Leona!
Uh...yeah, I’m too scared of heights! But barefoot climbing is the way to go! There was an amazing playground on Okinawa with this extremely tall, steep wooden wall and a rope to climb it, and my friends and I used to play Pont-du-Hoc barefoot on it. XD Also, Villarreal or Ramirez. ;) I love Spanish names and never have enough Hispanic characters for them.
ReplyDeleteFun memories!
ReplyDeleteOh, more good last names. I haven't had a lot of Hispanic characters, so haven't needed names. :)
Ortiz! I love this last name as we know some missionaries with it ;)
ReplyDeleteThis story ms kestrel me dizzy, lol! I might would be okay...I don't know...I definitely wouldn't be sitting on the edge if it could be helped! And poor kid, I just want to hold him!
Yeah. While I don't mind heights, I wouldn't want to be sitting on the edge either!
ReplyDeleteOh, thanks for the last name! I'm going to write them all down so I have whatever I don't use now, for future reference. :)